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Not Bad!

Like you said "it's not the best flash ever" but i can see that you put a lot of effort in it. The intro, all the voice acting and synching it into the flash, etc.

The animation and char desing was pretty decent, and the plot is very creative too.

Only thing i would recomend you to really improve in further submisions is the sound quality, if you can spare some Mb, set it to normal or better. And for further voice acting it would be nice if you could give them a lil more "life" to it, it was a little monotone.

So bottom line, good job, try to keep improving, who knows maybe you'll get a daily feature someday. Good luck =).

Very nice graphics and animation

But the script needs more work, its a bit dull. You could have done a parody of the whole "bullet to the head" evoking. That would have been hilarious.

Still, your animation skills are worthy of praise, so you have my congratulations. Cheers.

That was balls up the walls

Fucking hillarious.

Im impressed

Usually when people submit dress up games, it's some kind of joke or half-assed attempt to do something decent.

But this one is actually pretty kick ass, i can see you've put a lot of effort (and love) into this game. I like that you added a lot of cool features, like changing some of the clothes color, the girls hair and facial expression.

Overall, very good job.

It's ok

The concept is not far from the truth, you have to work on your graphics and you should add the option to stop music. So people can decide if they are going to listen to what you propose, or their own music.

It has potential

You need to work on the visual aspect, but the overall concept is ok.

Awesome

This tune is awesome man, but IMHO i think the kick needs more bass, it sounds a little weak, specially when its the main sound.

Great song!.

Goddamn

This is awesome. Keep it up man.

Mindblowing

This song gives a dark and holy feeling at the same time, it sounds crazy but i know that people who heard the song know what i mean.

This sounds like a professional game soundtrack.

Everything...

Just looks awesome.

Awesome

This is truly the work of a pro. I recomended you for the art portal, for great justice.

I think they do too

I really like the way you colored this, It screams "future".