Like you said "it's not the best flash ever" but i can see that you put a lot of effort in it. The intro, all the voice acting and synching it into the flash, etc.
The animation and char desing was pretty decent, and the plot is very creative too.
Only thing i would recomend you to really improve in further submisions is the sound quality, if you can spare some Mb, set it to normal or better. And for further voice acting it would be nice if you could give them a lil more "life" to it, it was a little monotone.
So bottom line, good job, try to keep improving, who knows maybe you'll get a daily feature someday. Good luck =).
But the script needs more work, its a bit dull. You could have done a parody of the whole "bullet to the head" evoking. That would have been hilarious.
Still, your animation skills are worthy of praise, so you have my congratulations. Cheers.
Usually when people submit dress up games, it's some kind of joke or half-assed attempt to do something decent.
But this one is actually pretty kick ass, i can see you've put a lot of effort (and love) into this game. I like that you added a lot of cool features, like changing some of the clothes color, the girls hair and facial expression.
This would have been awesome as a comedy short about a guy who can't sleep, but Presented this way, feels like something is missing. I mean, its not funny, its not informative, and to say the truth nothing really happens.
The drawings were good, the little animation was ok, i recomend you work on your scripts.
I think you are missing the point of the animation. It is supposed to portray atmosphere and emotion rather than be some cheap 'funny' Flash animation. As if that isn't overdone enough already.
I liked it, besides the odd physics here and there it was very well done. I liked that when the music pace got faster, the ball movement became baster too.
I enjoyed this animation, the skill effects were pretty cool, and the sound was nicely done too. The fight was pretty cool, though i did not like how you resolved it with a magic mushroom (im more of a "fight to death" fan hehe =P).
Overall, great job, keep on improving. As a recomendation for future episodes, it would be good to make the text skipping quicker, maybe allowing the viewer to pass presing the "SPACE" key instead of clicking.
Usually if i wanna watch an animation, i don't expect to have to interact, so using a key instead of having to click exactly where the "next" box is, would be much more comfortable.
You know, I was trying to get in a skip button (which i gave up after 50 syntax errors) but now that you mention a space bar, that's an excellent idea :D thanks!~
Also, since most of my animations have been cut short. Mainly because I wear out pretty quickly. Once I'm able to animate at a much more constant pace, I can add in more intense battles that end less... *edit lol* predictable :D
Faito
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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars February 6, 2011
Not Bad!
Like you said "it's not the best flash ever" but i can see that you put a lot of effort in it. The intro, all the voice acting and synching it into the flash, etc.
The animation and char desing was pretty decent, and the plot is very creative too.
Only thing i would recomend you to really improve in further submisions is the sound quality, if you can spare some Mb, set it to normal or better. And for further voice acting it would be nice if you could give them a lil more "life" to it, it was a little monotone.
So bottom line, good job, try to keep improving, who knows maybe you'll get a daily feature someday. Good luck =).
thanks for that, I'll take that into mind when making the next ones, audacity was playing up when i was making it with the recordings
Rated 4 / 5 stars October 10, 2009
Very nice graphics and animation
But the script needs more work, its a bit dull. You could have done a parody of the whole "bullet to the head" evoking. That would have been hilarious.
Still, your animation skills are worthy of praise, so you have my congratulations. Cheers.
it made the point it was meant to make.
thanks- the animation was the important part this time.
Rated 5 / 5 stars October 6, 2009
That was balls up the walls
Fucking hillarious.
Rated 5 / 5 stars September 24, 2009
Lol
I didn't see that one coming, nice drawings, nice animation, nice script.
Very nice =)
Thank you so much! ^_^
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars September 24, 2009
Im impressed
Usually when people submit dress up games, it's some kind of joke or half-assed attempt to do something decent.
But this one is actually pretty kick ass, i can see you've put a lot of effort (and love) into this game. I like that you added a lot of cool features, like changing some of the clothes color, the girls hair and facial expression.
Overall, very good job.
I can't remember the last time I saw a dress up game on Newgrounds :D
Thank you so much!
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars September 11, 2009
IMHO
This would have been awesome as a comedy short about a guy who can't sleep, but Presented this way, feels like something is missing. I mean, its not funny, its not informative, and to say the truth nothing really happens.
The drawings were good, the little animation was ok, i recomend you work on your scripts.
I think you are missing the point of the animation. It is supposed to portray atmosphere and emotion rather than be some cheap 'funny' Flash animation. As if that isn't overdone enough already.
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars September 10, 2009
Nice
I liked it, besides the odd physics here and there it was very well done. I liked that when the music pace got faster, the ball movement became baster too.
Rated 5 / 5 stars September 10, 2009
Excelent
They say that, if you stare at the starry sky on a summer night, you can see the 50 MPH man, racing against the stars.
Keep on runing 50 MPH man.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars September 10, 2009
Great!
Wow, very good job, the lip sync is awesome and the animation looks very smooth.
Rated 4 / 5 stars September 9, 2009
Well done
I enjoyed this animation, the skill effects were pretty cool, and the sound was nicely done too. The fight was pretty cool, though i did not like how you resolved it with a magic mushroom (im more of a "fight to death" fan hehe =P).
Overall, great job, keep on improving. As a recomendation for future episodes, it would be good to make the text skipping quicker, maybe allowing the viewer to pass presing the "SPACE" key instead of clicking.
Usually if i wanna watch an animation, i don't expect to have to interact, so using a key instead of having to click exactly where the "next" box is, would be much more comfortable.
Best regards.
You know, I was trying to get in a skip button (which i gave up after 50 syntax errors) but now that you mention a space bar, that's an excellent idea :D thanks!~
Also, since most of my animations have been cut short. Mainly because I wear out pretty quickly. Once I'm able to animate at a much more constant pace, I can add in more intense battles that end less... *edit lol* predictable :D