Faito's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[how not to scam a casino]

Not Bad!

Like you said "it's not the best flash ever" but i can see that you put a lot of effort in it. The intro, all the voice acting and synching it into the flash, etc.

The animation and char desing was pretty decent, and the plot is very creative too.

Only thing i would recomend you to really improve in further submisions is the sound quality, if you can spare some Mb, set it to normal or better. And for further voice acting it would be nice if you could give them a lil more "life" to it, it was a little monotone.

So bottom line, good job, try to keep improving, who knows maybe you'll get a daily feature someday. Good luck =).

flashallround responds:

thanks for that, I'll take that into mind when making the next ones, audacity was playing up when i was making it with the recordings

[Persona 4 - I Can't Wait!]

Very nice graphics and animation

But the script needs more work, its a bit dull. You could have done a parody of the whole "bullet to the head" evoking. That would have been hilarious.

Still, your animation skills are worthy of praise, so you have my congratulations. Cheers.

mrnihil responds:

it made the point it was meant to make.

thanks- the animation was the important part this time.

[Nothing Cures Insomnia..]

IMHO

This would have been awesome as a comedy short about a guy who can't sleep, but Presented this way, feels like something is missing. I mean, its not funny, its not informative, and to say the truth nothing really happens.

The drawings were good, the little animation was ok, i recomend you work on your scripts.

JIStone responds:

I think you are missing the point of the animation. It is supposed to portray atmosphere and emotion rather than be some cheap 'funny' Flash animation. As if that isn't overdone enough already.

[MapleHitman: Prologue]

Well done

I enjoyed this animation, the skill effects were pretty cool, and the sound was nicely done too. The fight was pretty cool, though i did not like how you resolved it with a magic mushroom (im more of a "fight to death" fan hehe =P).

Overall, great job, keep on improving. As a recomendation for future episodes, it would be good to make the text skipping quicker, maybe allowing the viewer to pass presing the "SPACE" key instead of clicking.

Usually if i wanna watch an animation, i don't expect to have to interact, so using a key instead of having to click exactly where the "next" box is, would be much more comfortable.

Best regards.

runescapeop responds:

You know, I was trying to get in a skip button (which i gave up after 50 syntax errors) but now that you mention a space bar, that's an excellent idea :D thanks!~

Also, since most of my animations have been cut short. Mainly because I wear out pretty quickly. Once I'm able to animate at a much more constant pace, I can add in more intense battles that end less... *edit lol* predictable :D

[Battle of the end]

Nice

It's nice to see someone who actually listens to the advise given in the reviews. I liked this animation, the sounds are well synched with the hits (and movements), and the speedy animation suited the battle perfectly.

I think this is worth a 7 but i'll give you +3 points for taking it like a man, honestly listen to other peoples opinions and learning from your mistakes.

Hope to see more from you in the future, keep on learning.

xXDaphatfriarXx responds:

Thanks, im just mostly glad its not blammed

[An Unpleasant Encounter]

Lol

Well done sir, the art is nice and the random humor is well employed.

sober-joe responds:

Thanks!

[Are U Ready 4 Bloody Hell]

Hmmm...

Not bad, the movement is pretty smooth, you need to work a little on the blood, but its ok.

I liked it.

StickYou responds:

Thanks!

[Vete a la Versh 9]

Excelente

Jajaja muy bueno, lastima que no este en latino neutral, pero igual me gusto mucho.

Darkar responds:

Mmm... dudo mucho que exista algo como un "latino neutral".

[Sonic Switch Part 1]

Great!

Well very good man, its great to see something about sonic that is not sprite made. The drawings are very good, and the voice actors are great too.

The only thing i could criticize a bit is the animation. Is there any way u can make it more fluid?, in some parts it seems like there were frames missing when the chars move.

I'll give a 10/10 and 5/5 anyway couse i know u will improve that in the near future.

Great work man.

Comick responds:

Thank you for the review, I will animate better :D