Not Bad!

Like you said "it's not the best flash ever" but i can see that you put a lot of effort in it. The intro, all the voice acting and synching it into the flash, etc.

The animation and char desing was pretty decent, and the plot is very creative too.

Only thing i would recomend you to really improve in further submisions is the sound quality, if you can spare some Mb, set it to normal or better. And for further voice acting it would be nice if you could give them a lil more "life" to it, it was a little monotone.

So bottom line, good job, try to keep improving, who knows maybe you'll get a daily feature someday. Good luck =).

Very nice graphics and animation

But the script needs more work, its a bit dull. You could have done a parody of the whole "bullet to the head" evoking. That would have been hilarious.

Still, your animation skills are worthy of praise, so you have my congratulations. Cheers.

That was balls up the walls

Fucking hillarious.

Good game

Pretty entertaining, the only downside is that maybe the game is a bit unchallenging. You should work to somehow fill the screen faster with enemies so its harder to move around.

It's still a 9, but for future versions work harder in pestering the user. Everybody loves a challenge =).

Awesome

This tune is awesome man, but IMHO i think the kick needs more bass, it sounds a little weak, specially when its the main sound.

Great song!.

Goddamn

This is awesome. Keep it up man.

Mindblowing

This song gives a dark and holy feeling at the same time, it sounds crazy but i know that people who heard the song know what i mean.

This sounds like a professional game soundtrack.

I think they do too

I really like the way you colored this, It screams "future".

Awesome

Look very realistic, the lightning is perfect. It would be an awesome background for a Visual Novel.

Pretty

Nuclear launch detected, if you know what i mean ;).